From f87f190b6a679bde81cbdef688f3c5b778d33569 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pierre-Antoine Champin <pierre-antoine@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 27 Mar 2024 16:13:30 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] suggested by @jyasskin in
 https://github.com/solid/solid-wg-charter/pull/69/files#r1529416046

---
 charter/index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/charter/index.html b/charter/index.html
index aa4c0e1..231802b 100644
--- a/charter/index.html
+++ b/charter/index.html
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ <h2>Motivation and Background</h2>
         <h2>Scope</h2>
 
         <p>
-          <span class=new>The scope of the Working Group is to define a web protocol for use between client-side applications, on the one hand, and storage and identity servers, on the other, allowing</span> users to keep authority over their data, identity, and privacy.
+          <span class=new>The scope of the Working Group is to define a web protocol that client-side applications can use to authenticate users and store their data with user-chosen identity and storage servers. Applications that use this protocol can more easily allow their</span> users to keep authority over their data, identity, and privacy.
           This protocol will ensure interoperability between compliant user applications, and compliant storage and identity servers,
           thus giving users the freedom to select the applications and services that suit their needs.
         </p>

From 59c37f3f74b128e6760b50803a27f3f2a3206524 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pierre-Antoine Champin <pierre-antoine@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 16 Apr 2024 22:46:32 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] some of @TallTed's suggestions

from https://github.com/solid/solid-wg-charter/pull/71/files#r1543358939
---
 charter/index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/charter/index.html b/charter/index.html
index 231802b..b97ab9e 100644
--- a/charter/index.html
+++ b/charter/index.html
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ <h2>Motivation and Background</h2>
         <h2>Scope</h2>
 
         <p>
-          <span class=new>The scope of the Working Group is to define a web protocol that client-side applications can use to authenticate users and store their data with user-chosen identity and storage servers. Applications that use this protocol can more easily allow their</span> users to keep authority over their data, identity, and privacy.
+          <span class=new>The scope of the Working Group is to define a web protocol that client-side applications can use to authenticate users and store their data with user-chosen identity and storage servers. Applications that use this protocol can more easily allow their users to exert and maintain</span> authority over their data, identity, and privacy.
           This protocol will ensure interoperability between compliant user applications, and compliant storage and identity servers,
           thus giving users the freedom to select the applications and services that suit their needs.
         </p>

From 5354c4ef5ff17f433df00ce8438bcf659416c754 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pierre-Antoine Champin <pierre-antoine@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2024 14:54:27 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Update charter/index.html

Co-authored-by: Sarven Capadisli <info@csarven.ca>
---
 charter/index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/charter/index.html b/charter/index.html
index b97ab9e..d0ff71f 100644
--- a/charter/index.html
+++ b/charter/index.html
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ <h2>Motivation and Background</h2>
         <h2>Scope</h2>
 
         <p>
-          <span class=new>The scope of the Working Group is to define a web protocol that client-side applications can use to authenticate users and store their data with user-chosen identity and storage servers. Applications that use this protocol can more easily allow their users to exert and maintain</span> authority over their data, identity, and privacy.
+          <span class=new>The scope of the Working Group is to define a web protocol that applications can use to authenticate users and store their data with user-chosen identity and storage servers. Applications that use this protocol can more easily allow their users to exert and maintain</span> authority over their data, identity, and privacy.
           This protocol will ensure interoperability between compliant user applications, and compliant storage and identity servers,
           thus giving users the freedom to select the applications and services that suit their needs.
         </p>