diff --git a/spec/index.bs b/spec/index.bs
index eec0862c..2b6a76d2 100644
--- a/spec/index.bs
+++ b/spec/index.bs
@@ -330,10 +330,10 @@ const credential = await navigator.credentials.get({
 ```
 </div>
 
-For fetches that are sent with cookies, unpartitioned
+When fetches are sent with cookies, unpartitioned
 [SameSite](https://httpwg.org/http-extensions/draft-ietf-httpbis-rfc6265bis.html#name-the-samesite-attribute-2)=None
 cookies are included. It doesn't introduce security issues on the API even when third-party cookies are otherwise
-disabled because the [=RP=] cannot inspect the results from the fetches on its own (e.g. the browser mediates what
+disabled because the [=RP=] cannot inspect the results from the fetches on its own (i.e., the browser mediates what
 the [=RP=] can receive).
 
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