Copyediting of the HTTP/2 Chapter

[rachellcostello]

I've made some amends of the copy in this chapter, mainly for readability.

[tunetheweb]

Thanks @rachellcostello ! Improved it in many, many places. Do have a few comments though if you don't mind reviewing?

BTW for the internal links I've been using [CDN](./cdn) rather than the full page, in the chapters I wrote and edited, so they will be language agnostic for when we add other languages so have suggested reverting those back.

[rviscomi]

I'll give this a review after @bazzadp's feedback is resolved. Don't want to clobber any of his comments.

[tunetheweb]

@rviscomi think you're good to review. Some open comment still above but will leave them for you to give you opinion and can then resolve if you agree with @rachellcostello that I need reigning in - not the first time I've heard this btw... 😊

[tunetheweb]

Resolved those other items and added suggestions to add back the missing text.

@rachellcostello you happy with this or feel strongly it shouldn't go back in? Or maybe shouldn't go back in as it currently stands and can be edited more without removing it completely?

[rachellcostello]

Looks good and happy with any additions you want to make @bazzadp - I love the detail and personal opinions you offer in this chapter! I'd hate to edit it down too far and lose that.

[tunetheweb]

Thanks so much to both of you! Great job here - especially when having to deal with my ego for a lot of the edits! 😊

As a fellow (wannabe!) editor, I don't think people will appreciate how much work went into the editing. Luckily we're all authors on this too, so will get more than enough credit (hopefully!) for our work there.

[rviscomi]

Is this ready to merge?

[tunetheweb]

Yup think so.