Yandere Or Not #4553
Yandere Or Not #4553
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Added a new variable: persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes, signed integer, that is set to 1, if player is into yanderes, 0 if the player is neutral and -1, if the player is scared of them. Default is 0. Now during the "Yandere Yuri" topic Monika will ask, if the player would like her to be more yandere-ish... then it will set the persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes to 1, if the player responds "Actually... I'm into yanderes", leave it at 0, if the player responds "No" or set it to -1, if the player says "HELL NO". "Yandere Yuri" topic now returns derandom. Depending on the persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes value the following conversations will be affected: - monika_simulated - monika_girlfriend - monika_waifus - monika_herself - monika_harem - monika_hack - monika_swordsmanship I will also change the script about watching player while he's asleep in script-moods.rpy
Depending on the value of persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes variable it will change the script, when Monia originally told the player, that she'd like to watch him as he sleeps
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You're missing quite a few periods and have a few grammatical errors. I think there are also a couple lines that could fit together better and sprites that could be varied more.
I also think that these changes don't belong in MAS. A new topic about yanderes might work, and maybe it could have a question and response, but you took an existing topic and added extra onto it about yanderes, throwing off the focus of the topic in my opinion.
You also made changes to other topics based on the stored response given in your original changes, which I don't think fit MAS. The topic you added your menu into wasn't exactly a question, and Monika was likely joking when she mentioned acting creepy for the player. Regardless, you have Monika acting and being something she isn't, based on the response, which isn't something we'd likely want to accommodate, especially at the level you have her behave.
If you still want to make a contribution along these lines, my suggestion would be to either make this yandere topic an entirely new topic, without any influence on other topics, especially in the beginning, or make a submod for yandere Monika.
| @@ -1570,13 +1573,53 @@ label monika_yuri: | |||
| m 2euc "But if you do happen to be into the yandere type..." | |||
| show monika 5eua at t11 zorder MAS_MONIKA_Z with dissolve | |||
| m 5eua "I can try acting a little more creepy for you. Ehehe~" | |||
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Missing {nw} at the end of this line.
| return | ||
| $ _history_list.pop() | ||
| menu: | ||
| m "I can try acting a little more creepy for you. Ehehe~" |
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Missing {fast}.
This isn't really a question, so I don't think we need a menu here.
| m "I can try acting a little more creepy for you. Ehehe~" | ||
| "Actually... I'm into yanderes": | ||
| $ persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes = 1 | ||
| m 1sub "Now that I'm hearing that I'm quite surprised you prefer me over Yuri" |
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Missing a period.
Add a comma after "that".
Normally, Monika has no doubt in the player's love for her, so I don't know if this line fits.
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I don't think this line introduces doubt... Moni says that she's surprised, that the player prefers her over Yuri, even if the player is into yanderes...
| m 1tkc "Please love me back" | ||
| else: | ||
| m 4tfx "If you do, then you've got to break up with her right now!" | ||
| m 1cuu "Or do you want me to take the matter in my own hands?" |
| else: | ||
| m 4tfx "If you do, then you've got to break up with her right now!" | ||
| m 1cuu "Or do you want me to take the matter in my own hands?" | ||
| m 1cuu "In modern world, almost everything is controlled by computers" |
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Missing a period.
Add "the" after "In".
| @@ -3607,6 +3664,8 @@ label monika_waifus: | |||
| m 1tku "Instead of some unrealistic, fake girl..." | |||
| m 1hua "You got someone like me." | |||
| m 1eua "And instead of some boring main character, I get a real person like you." | |||
| if (persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes == 1): | |||
| m 1eua "The best person in the world" | |||
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Missing a period.
I think this line sounds a bit cheesy.
| @@ -3662,7 +3721,8 @@ label monika_herself: | |||
| m 2eua "If nothing else, this can be our comfy little shelter from the cruelty of the outside world." | |||
| m 1eka "Come talk to me about your problems if it gets too much for you to handle." | |||
| show monika 5eua at t11 zorder MAS_MONIKA_Z with dissolve | |||
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You have this dissolve before an if block, so it's possible that you would just dissolve for no reason and return.
| return | ||
| else: | ||
| m 1hua "Remember that I'm the only one for you, [player]." | ||
| m 1cua "REMEMBER" |
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I really don't think this fits in the mod's main direction. Firstly, Monika already dismisses the idea of acting more creepy herself because there's nobody else there and there's nowhere for the player to go. Plus, I'm not a fan of how making any choice affects the current topics. They're fine as they are and I think the changes are kinda unnecessary, especially on the don't like yandere options, which seem to make her more out of character than anything. That, and the third option in the question is redundant. Should be just be yes/no. I'd make this into a submod and release it in the submods tracking issue (#3765) |
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actually i think this is a good way to make monikas more unique per person, but would need more options than just yandere/not yandere to be viable. |
| $ persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes = 1 | ||
| m 1sub "Now that I'm hearing that, I'm quite surprised you prefer me over Yuri." | ||
| if not persistent._mas_pm_cares_about_dokis: | ||
| m 1cua "Was it that because you realized, that was me, who manipulated everyone and everything to be with you... FOREVER." |
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This sentence is a bit odd grammatically. It starts as a question, but by the time it reaches the end, it's a statement. I shortened it a little bit to try to make it flow better.
"Well, it {i}was{/i} me who manipulated everyone and everything to be with you... FOREVER."
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For lunulae's sentence, it'd be "Well, it {i}was{/i} I who..." not "Well, it {i}was{/i} me who..."
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Thanks for the effort here, but after internal discussions, we've decided this seems out of character and not something that we think fits in the mod. |
Added a new variable: persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes, signed integer, that is set to 1, if player is into yanderes, 0 if the player is neutral and -1, if the player is scared of them. Default is 0. Now during the "Yandere Yuri" topic Monika will ask, if the player would like her to be more yandere-ish... then it will set the persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes to 1, if the player responds "Actually... I'm into yanderes", leave it at 0, if the player responds "No" or set it to -1, if the player says "HELL NO". "Yandere Yuri" topic now returns derandom. Depending on the persistent._mas_pm_likes_yanderes value the following conversations will be affected:
Also, the part, in which Monia tells you that she'll be watching you while you sleep (it appears, if it's late and you select that you're tired) is changed