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diff --git a/src/components/HomepageFeatures/index.js b/src/components/HomepageFeatures/index.js
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ const FeatureList = [
     img: ImgLibrary,
     description: (
       <>
-        Browse through your servers beautifully organized library to download,
-        install and and play your collection of videogames of all kinds!
+        Browse your server's beautifully organized library to download, install
+        and play your collection of video games of all kinds!
       </>
     ),
   },
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ const FeatureList = [
     img: ImgAuth,
     description: (
       <>
-        Share your platform with your friends and loved ones, so they can also
-        enjoy your library. Administrate your users and games.
+        Share your platform with your friends and family so they can enjoy your
+        library, too. Administrate your users and games.
       </>
     ),
   },
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ const FeatureList = [
     img: ImgSocial,
     description: (
       <>
-        See how long you or your friends played a game, find out what they are
-        playing and keep track what you've already completed or aborted.
+        See how long you or your friends have been playing a game, find out what
+        they are and keep track of what you've already completed or abandoned.
       </>
     ),
   },
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ const FeatureList = [
     description: (
       <>
         GameVault automatically enriches your game with all the juicy
-        information and pictures using the largest videogame database.
+        information and and images from the largest video game database.
       </>
     ),
   },
@@ -55,14 +55,14 @@ const FeatureList = [
     img: ImgMicrosoftStore,
     description: (
       <>
-        There's no need to compile stuff. Our application is officially
+        There's no need to compile anything. Our application is officially
         available in the{" "}
         <a href="https://www.microsoft.com/store/apps/9PCKDV76GL75">
           Microsoft Store
         </a>
         .{" "}
         <a href="/docs/server-docs/setup">
-          Setting up a Server using our Docker Image
+          Setting up a server using our Docker image
         </a>{" "}
         is just as easy!
       </>
@@ -74,10 +74,10 @@ const FeatureList = [
     description: (
       <>
         <a target="_blank" href="https://discord.gg/NEdNen2dSu">
-          Join our expanding community
-        </a>
+          Join our growing community
+        </a>{" "}
         , star us on GitHub, or even <a href="/docs/contribute">contribute</a>{" "}
-        to our source-available project! Everybody can help!
+        to our source-available project! Everyone can help!
       </>
     ),
   },

diff --git a/src/pages/gamevault-plus.md b/src/pages/gamevault-plus.md
@@ -14,18 +14,23 @@ Welcome to **GameVault+**, the premium upgrade designed for enthusiasts seeking
 
 As of now, we are offering the following features:
 
-- 📸 Uploading animated Profile Pictures
+- 📸 Uploading animated profile pictures
 
 ## Pricing
 
 The GameVault+ subscription is priced affordably at **€ 4.99/month** or **€ 49.99/year**.
 
 ## Get Started
 
+:::info Work in progress
+We are still preparing the GameVault+ product. Stay tuned!
+:::
+
+<!--
 1. [Sign up](https://phalco.de/account/signup) or [log in](https://phalco.de/account/login) to your Phalcode account
 2. [Subscribe to GameVault+](https://phalco.de/products/gamevault-plus)
 3. [Set up your GameVault Client](/docs/client-docs/gamevault-plus)
-4. **Enjoy the premium features**
+4. **Enjoy the premium features** -->
 
 ## Frequently Asked Questions
 

diff --git a/src/pages/index.js b/src/pages/index.js
@@ -98,14 +98,14 @@ export default function Home() {
         <section>
           <br />
           <h2 id="heroTitle" className="text--center">
-            Create your personal Gaming Platform
+            Create your own gaming platform
           </h2>
           <h3 id="heroSubtitle" className="text--center">
-            Do you have games on your server and need an app to download,
-            install, share, launch, and track them?
+            Do you have games on your server and need an application to
+            download, install, share, launch and track them?
           </h3>
           <h3 id="heroSubtitle" className="text--center">
-            Then you are in the right place!
+            Then you have come to the right place!
           </h3>
         </section>
         <HomepageFeatures />