Update bio wording

aefhm · Sep 21, 2023 · dca9663 · dca9663
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@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ <h2>About</h2>
             <h3>What is a bobbin?</h3>
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               When I was little, my parents were swamped with grad school, and I stayed with my grandparents often.
-              My grandma operated a foot pedal sewing machine and made clothing, curtains, and even seat
+              My grandma operated a foot pedal sewing machine and made clothes, curtains, and even seat
               cushions herself when she wasn't overseeing the county's import export company during the day!
-              She agreed to teach me how to sew when I found her stash of buttons one day.
-              Bobbins hold not just threads, but know-how that reduced the amount of labor in producing textiles.
-              Likewise, culture is held, and we weave our stories into new ones.
+              She agreed to teach me how to sew when I found her jar of buttons one day.
+              Bobbins hold not just threads, but know-how that amplified the production of textiles.
+              Likewise, culture is held, and we weave past stories into new ones.
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