Merge pull request #689 from alan-turing-institute/copy_edits

Add in copy edits
alan-turing-institute · Jun 10, 2024 · d87d311 · d87d311
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diff --git a/server/apps/main/forms.py b/server/apps/main/forms.py
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ class ShareExperienceForm(forms.Form):
 
 
     experience_text = forms.CharField(label='Please share your experience', strip=True,
-                                help_text='Write your experience here, you can take as much or little space as you need.',
+                                help_text='Write your experience here. You can take as much or as little space as you need.',
                                 widget=forms.Textarea(attrs={'placeholder':'Please share your story.',
                                                              'rows':'4',
                                                              'class':'form-control'}))
@@ -31,11 +31,11 @@ class ShareExperienceForm(forms.Form):
     # add triggering here
     abuse = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Abuse (physical, sexual, emotional and verbal)', required=False)
     abuse.group = 2
-    violence = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Violence and Assault', required=False)
+    violence = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Violence and assault', required=False)
     violence.group = 2
-    drug = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Drug and/or Alcohol misuse', required=False)
+    drug = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Drug and/or alcohol misuse', required=False)
     drug.group = 2
-    mentalhealth = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Mental Health Issues', required=False)
+    mentalhealth = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Mental health issues', required=False)
     mentalhealth.group = 2
     negbody = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Negative body image', required=False)
     negbody.group = 2
@@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ class ModerateExperienceForm(forms.Form):
     # trigger labels
     abuse = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Abuse (physical, sexual, emotional and verbal)', required=False)
     abuse.group = 2
-    violence = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Violence and Assault', required=False)
+    violence = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Violence and assault', required=False)
     violence.group = 2
-    drug = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Drug and/or Alcohol misuse', required=False)
+    drug = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Drug and/or alcohol misuse', required=False)
     drug.group = 2
-    mentalhealth = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Mental Health Issues', required=False)
+    mentalhealth = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Mental health issues', required=False)
     mentalhealth.group = 2
     negbody = forms.BooleanField(label = 'Negative body image', required=False)
     negbody.group = 2

diff --git a/server/apps/main/templates/main/about_us.html b/server/apps/main/templates/main/about_us.html
diff --git a/server/apps/main/templates/main/content_moderation_guidelines.html b/server/apps/main/templates/main/content_moderation_guidelines.html
diff --git a/server/apps/main/templates/main/experiences_page.html b/server/apps/main/templates/main/experiences_page.html
@@ -23,19 +23,20 @@
   <div class="container">
     <div class="row">
       <div class="col-lg-12 text-left">
-        <h1 class="big-heading">View Stories</h1>
+        <h1 class="big-heading">View stories</h1>
       </div>
       <div class="col-lg-12 text-left">
-        <p class="intro-text">Autistic people often have different sensory processing to people who are not autistic.
-          By collecting together lots of autistic people's experiences, we can change spaces so that they are
-          better for autistic people.
+        <p class="intro-text">
+          Autistic people’s senses often work differently to those of non-autistic people, 
+          creating all sorts of challenges in day-to-day life. By collecting your experiences, 
+          we can learn more and use the information to influence decision-makers to make spaces more autism-friendly.
         </p>
       </div>
     </div>
     <div class="row">
       <div class="col">
           <a href="{% url 'main:share_exp' %}" class="float-end btn btn-light btn-lg">
-            Add Story
+            Add story
           </a>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -52,12 +53,11 @@ <h1 class="big-heading">View Stories</h1>
             <input class="form-control mb-2" id="inlineFormInput" placeholder="Search Stories" value="{{ searched }}" type="text" name="searched" />
           </div>
           <div class="col-md-2">
-            <button class="btn btn-primary mb-2" type="submit">Search Stories</button>
+            <button class="btn btn-primary mb-2" type="submit">Search stories</button>
           </div>
         </div>
-        <div class="trigger-warning-message"> We have excluded potentially
-          triggering content, please select any categories that you would be
-          comfortable seeing
+        <div class="trigger-warning-message">
+          We have <strong>excluded</strong> potentially triggering content. Please <strong>select any categories you would be comfortable seeing</strong>:
         </div>
       </div>
 
@@ -87,41 +87,41 @@ <h1 class="big-heading">View Stories</h1>
           <input class="form-check-input"
           type="checkbox"
           role="switch"
-          id="drug-checkbox"
-          name="drug"
+          id="violence-checkbox"
+          name="violence"
           value="True"
-          {{ checkdrug|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
-          <label class="form-check-label" for="drug-checkbox">Drug and/or Alcohol misuse</label>
+          {{ checkviolence|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
+          <label class="form-check-label" for="violence-checkbox">Violence and assault</label>
         </div>
         <div class="form-check form-switch">
           <input class="form-check-input"
           type="checkbox"
           role="switch"
-          id="negbody-checkbox"
-          name="negbody"
+          id="drug-checkbox"
+          name="drug"
           value="True"
-          {{ checknegbody|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
-          <label class="form-check-label" for="negbody-checkbox">Negative body image</label>
+          {{ checkdrug|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
+          <label class="form-check-label" for="drug-checkbox">Drug and/or alcohol misuse</label>
         </div>
         <div class="form-check form-switch">
           <input class="form-check-input"
           type="checkbox"
           role="switch"
-          id="violence-checkbox"
-          name="violence"
+          id="mentalhealth-checkbox"
+          name="mentalhealth"
           value="True"
-          {{ checkviolence|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
-          <label class="form-check-label" for="violence-checkbox">Violence and Assault</label>
+          {{ checkmentalhealth|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
+          <label class="form-check-label" for="mentalhealth-checkbox">Mental health issues</label>
         </div>
         <div class="form-check form-switch">
           <input class="form-check-input"
           type="checkbox"
           role="switch"
-          id="mentalhealth-checkbox"
-          name="mentalhealth"
+          id="negbody-checkbox"
+          name="negbody"
           value="True"
-          {{ checkmentalhealth|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
-          <label class="form-check-label" for="mentalhealth-checkbox">Mental Health Issues</label>
+          {{ checknegbody|yesno:"checked,unchecked" }} />
+          <label class="form-check-label" for="negbody-checkbox">Negative body image</label>
         </div>
         <div class="form-check form-switch">
           <input class="form-check-input"
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ <h1 class="big-heading">View Stories</h1>
                    <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">{{experience.other}}</span>
                  {% endif %}
                  {% if experience.mentalhealth %}
-                   <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">Mental Health issues</span>
+                   <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">Mental health issues</span>
                  {% endif %}
                  {% if experience.violence %}
                    <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">Violence</span>
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ <h1 class="big-heading">View Stories</h1>
                    <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">Negative body image</span>
                  {% endif %}
                  {% if experience.drug %}
-                   <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">Drug and/or Alcohol misuse</span>
+                   <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">Drug and/or alcohol misuse</span>
                  {% endif %}
                  {% if experience.abuse %}
                    <span class="badge text-bg-warning float-end" style="font-size: 1rem; margin-top:1%; margin-left:1%;">Abuse</span>