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UI change and added verbiage #8

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https://www.figma.com/proto/32D8JlBFc77JvLvGWPeSg5/WFT---Web-App-I?page-id=28948%3A201&node-id=33586-36831&node-type=frame&viewport=365%2C156%2C0.06&t=BinEpz1tN60B20p7-1&scaling=scale-down&content-scaling=fixed&starting-point-node-id=33586%3A36831


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enhancement, documentation


Description

  • Enhanced the UI of the speed test application by adding detailed instructions and recommendations for users.
  • Improved the JavaScript code with new functions for classifying and updating speed metrics, ensuring better user feedback.
  • Updated the CSS styles for a more consistent and visually appealing interface.
  • Reformatted the HTML and JavaScript code for better readability and maintainability.

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Relevant files
Enhancement
standalone.php
UI Enhancements and Code Formatting Improvements                 

docker/standalone.php

  • Improved code formatting and indentation.
  • Added new functions for classifying and updating speed metrics.
  • Enhanced UI with additional instructions and recommendations.
  • Updated CSS styles for better UI consistency.
  • +310/-212
    index.html
    UI and Functional Enhancements for Speed Test                       

    index.html

  • Added new JavaScript functions for speed test classification.
  • Enhanced UI with detailed instructions and recommendations.
  • Improved CSS styles for a consistent look and feel.
  • Updated HTML structure for better readability.
  • +729/-624

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    ⏱️ Estimated effort to review: 3 🔵🔵🔵⚪⚪
    🧪 No relevant tests
    🔒 No security concerns identified
    ⚡ Key issues to review

    Duplicate Code
    There are two instances of creating a Speedtest object (lines 14 and 25). This redundancy should be removed to avoid potential conflicts.

    Performance Concern
    The use of setTimeout for initializing UI (line 732) may cause a slight delay in rendering. Consider using DOMContentLoaded event listener instead for more reliable initialization.

    Accessibility Issue
    The color contrast for some text elements (e.g., lines 70, 73, 76) may not meet WCAG standards. This could affect readability for users with visual impairments.

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    PR Code Suggestions ✨

    CategorySuggestion                                                                                                                                    Score
    Code duplication
    Remove duplicate object creation to improve code efficiency

    Remove the duplicate creation of the Speedtest object. The s variable is already
    initialized earlier in the code.

    docker/standalone.php [25-26]

    -var s = new Speedtest(); //create speedtest object
     s.setParameter("telemetry_level", "basic"); //enable telemetry
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 9

    Why: The suggestion correctly identifies and removes a duplicate instantiation of the Speedtest object, which is a significant improvement in terms of code efficiency and clarity.

    9
    Possible bug
    Fix a typo in the variable name to prevent a potential runtime error

    In the updateUlColor function, there's a typo in the default case. It uses
    ul_element instead of ul_text_element. This could lead to a runtime error.

    index.html [99]

    -default: ul_element.style.color = "#111827";
    +default: ul_text_element.style.color = "#111827";
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 9

    Why: Correcting the typo in the updateUlColor function is crucial as it prevents a potential runtime error, which is a significant improvement.

    9
    Readability
    Use template literals for string concatenation

    Use template literals for better readability when constructing the shareURL string.

    docker/standalone.php [198-205]

    -var shareURL =
    -  window.location.href.substring(
    -    0,
    -    window.location.href.lastIndexOf("/")
    -  ) +
    -  "/results/?id=" +
    -  testId;
    +var shareURL = `${window.location.href.substring(0, window.location.href.lastIndexOf("/"))}/results/?id=${testId}`;
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 8

    Why: Using template literals enhances readability and maintainability of the code, making it easier to understand and modify.

    8
    Use a switch statement for multiple conditions

    Consider using a switch statement instead of multiple if-else conditions for better
    readability and potentially better performance.

    docker/standalone.php [233-241]

    -if (status == 1) {
    -  updateDlColor(uiData.dlStatus);
    -  // updateDlColor(30, "download");
    -} else if (status == 3) {
    -  updateUlColor(uiData.ulStatus);
    -} else {
    -  updateDlColor(uiData.dlStatus);
    -  updateUlColor(uiData.ulStatus);
    +switch (status) {
    +  case 1:
    +    updateDlColor(uiData.dlStatus);
    +    // updateDlColor(30, "download");
    +    break;
    +  case 3:
    +    updateUlColor(uiData.ulStatus);
    +    break;
    +  default:
    +    updateDlColor(uiData.dlStatus);
    +    updateUlColor(uiData.ulStatus);
     }
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 7

    Why: The switch statement improves readability by clearly delineating the different cases, although the performance gain is minimal in this context.

    7
    Best practice
    Use a more descriptive variable name for better code readability

    Consider using a more descriptive variable name instead of 's' for the Speedtest
    object. This will improve code readability and maintainability.

    index.html [18-19]

    -var s = new Speedtest(); //create speedtest object
    -s.setParameter("telemetry_level", "basic"); //enable telemetry
    +var speedtest = new Speedtest(); //create speedtest object
    +speedtest.setParameter("telemetry_level", "basic"); //enable telemetry
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 7

    Why: The suggestion to use a more descriptive variable name improves code readability and maintainability, which is beneficial for future developers who may work on this code.

    7
    Use nullish coalescing operator for fallback

    Consider using the nullish coalescing operator (??) instead of the logical OR
    operator (||) for the fallback in the requestAnimationFrame polyfill.

    docker/standalone.php [250-257]

     window.requestAnimationFrame =
    -  window.requestAnimationFrame ||
    -  window.webkitRequestAnimationFrame ||
    -  window.mozRequestAnimationFrame ||
    -  window.msRequestAnimationFrame ||
    +  window.requestAnimationFrame ??
    +  window.webkitRequestAnimationFrame ??
    +  window.mozRequestAnimationFrame ??
    +  window.msRequestAnimationFrame ??
       function (callback, element) {
         setTimeout(callback, 1000 / 60);
       };
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 6

    Why: The nullish coalescing operator is a more precise choice for handling undefined values, but in this specific case, the logical OR operator is sufficient, making this a minor improvement.

    6
    Maintainability
    Clarify the reason for different classification thresholds between upload and download speeds

    The classifySpeedUpload function uses different thresholds than classifySpeed.
    Consider unifying these functions or clearly documenting the reason for the
    difference.

    index.html [50-55]

     function classifySpeedUpload(value) {
       if (value == "") return 0;
       if (value > 20) return 3;
       if (value >= 5) return 2;
       return 1;
     }
    +// Note: Upload speed classification uses different thresholds than download speed
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 6

    Why: Adding a comment to clarify the different thresholds used in classifySpeedUpload enhances code maintainability by providing context for future developers.

    6
    Remove or implement commented-out code for drawing meters

    The updateUI function contains commented-out code for drawing meters. Consider
    removing this code if it's no longer needed, or implement the meter drawing
    functionality if it's still required.

    index.html [219-222]

    -// drawMeter(I("dlMeter"), mbpsToAmount(Number(uiData.dlStatus * (status == 1 ? oscillate() : 1))), meterBk, dlColor, Number(uiData.dlProgress), progColor);
     I("ulText").textContent = status == 3 && uiData.ulStatus == 0 ? "..." : format(uiData.ulStatus);
    -// drawMeter(I("ulMeter"), mbpsToAmount(Number(uiData.ulStatus * (status == 3 ? oscillate() : 1))), meterBk, ulColor, Number(uiData.ulProgress), progColor);
     
    • Apply this suggestion
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 5

    Why: The suggestion to address commented-out code helps maintain code cleanliness and clarity, though it is not critical unless the functionality is needed.

    5

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    @deb-cod deb-cod merged commit 3ebbc6a into master Sep 25, 2024
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