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Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <[email protected]>
w3c-fedid · Sep 23, 2024 · 662dc2e · 662dc2e
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@@ -330,10 +330,10 @@ const credential = await navigator.credentials.get({
 ```
 </div>
 
-For fetches that are sent with cookies, unpartitioned
+When fetches are sent with cookies, unpartitioned
 [SameSite](https://httpwg.org/http-extensions/draft-ietf-httpbis-rfc6265bis.html#name-the-samesite-attribute-2)=None
 cookies are included. It doesn't introduce security issues on the API even when third-party cookies are otherwise
-disabled because the [=RP=] cannot inspect the results from the fetches on its own (e.g. the browser mediates what
+disabled because the [=RP=] cannot inspect the results from the fetches on its own (i.e., the browser mediates what
 the [=RP=] can receive).
 
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