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Clean up spelling, wording and punctuation #93

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@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ show_menu () {
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sudo /etc/init.d/craftbeerpiboot stop
whiptail --title "CraftBeerPi stoped" --msgbox "The software is stoped" 8 78
whiptail --title "CraftBeerPi stoped" --msgbox "The software is stopped." 8 78

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Still a typo on this line.

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Looks all good to me!

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flo269 commented Jul 18, 2017

;-) thanks for opening my eyes!

hop_2_added = Property.Number("", default_value=None)
hop_3 = Property.Number("Hop 3 Addition", configurable=True)
hop_3_added = Property.Number("", default_value=None, description="Second Hop alert")
hop_3_added = Property.Number("", default_value=None, description="Second hop alert.")

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Should be third

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ def get(self):
return json.dumps(result)
except Exception as e:
print e
self.api.notify(headline="Failed to load KHB database", message="ERROR", type="danger")
self.api.notify(headline="Failed to load KHB database.", message="ERROR", type="danger")

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KHB is a new acronym not explained before.

temp = Property.Number("Temperature", configurable=True, default_value=100, description="Target temperature for boiling.")
kettle = StepProperty.Kettle("Kettle", description="Kettle in which the boiling step takes place.")
timer = Property.Number("Timer in Minutes", configurable=True, default_value=90, description="Timer is started when target temperature is reached.")
hop_1 = Property.Number("Hop 1 Addition", configurable=True, description="Fist hop alert.")

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Should say First not fist

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Could this PR be integrated? It seems like a lot of work went into this, it would be a shame if it rots away.

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Please consider this pull request

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Line 83 needs an edit

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